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Black Frequency's Story by Redrosesforever Black Frequency's Story by Redrosesforever

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So....here is the back story for my OC!
Sorry for the spelling mistakes, I know I made a few obvious ones...:iconotlplz:

Near the beginning, where it says Black Frequency is a F-22 fighter jet, I honestly don't if she really is. It really depends on what type of aircraft Starscream is. But I couldn't find any information on what type of jet he was, so I just used the movie jet, which is still boss!
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spiketail94 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Very nice! I love how the introduction and ending break the fourth wall, a very hard feat to successfully pull off!

The story flows at a good, steady pace, and the way it's written keeps your attention captured throughout its entirety. Yeah, there were a bunch of spelling mistakes, but you've included a broad lexicon which more than makes up for it. :D

Personally I'm not that partial to ninja bots, I find the whole concept to be too human. But, as BF pointed out herself, many consider her persona to be human-like in nature. So that personally struck a cord with me. I'm thinking maybe I should look into ninja bots again... ^-^

"Most of us have forgotten to speak Cybertronian." I'm quite sure I agree with the idea, but the show never explained how they transcended the language barrier in the first place. For all we know it could be canon (or Cybertronian and English are somehow a universal languages, transcending time and space). At any rate, it's of little consequence anyway XP

All in all an awesome sauce piece! I love it! :iconiloveitplz: :iconlove: :icondancingplz: :iconexcitedplz:

You going to post more anytime soon or are you just going to stick with the background story?
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Redrosesforever Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Just the background story, i can't write short fan fics well. ^v^'
Thanks for the review!
It means so much to me!

I'm glad you love it!:iconlove::huggle::iconiloveyouplz:
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spiketail94 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Anytime! ^_^
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